In many cities today, most people live in large apartment blocks. Does this kind of accommodation have more advantages or disadvantages?
Instead of a house, Many people prefer a flat in apartments as their habitation, in most cities. In my opinion, I believe that housing is a serious problem, especially in urban areas, because of growing population, so apartments offer more upsides, such as reasonable cost of living, compared to raw houses.
To begin with, multi-storey buildings are an excellent solution to the housing crisis which is arising these day in major cities because of a growing number of people are migrating to urban areas, in the hope of better employment opportunities. Besides, it costs king' ransom to purchase a separate house while flats offer an excellent value for money, which a commoner can easily afford. Take for an example, a two-bedrooms-hall-kitchen flat costs half the price of house with same floor area. Thus, people prefer to stay in apartment blocks over raw houses.
On the other hand, builders construct apartments with an aim to accommodate as many residences as they can, to make it more cost effective, which leads to huge congestion. For example, residence apartments without even parking space in the middle of urban center. As a result, there is hardly any open space left to set up any play areas for families with children, or to expand it in the long run. Moreover, organising a function at home would be difficult because of space constraint, and it causes inconvenience to the neighbours who live right next door on the same floor.
In conclusion, although there are downsides of apartments, it can be easily overcome if they are built by following good standards. Once, governments ensure strict regulation while setting up a colony, more people will choose to stay in flats.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 104, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this day' or 'these days'?
Suggestion: this day; these days
... to the housing crisis which is arising these day in major cities because of a growing nu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, moreover, so, thus, while, as for, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03546099291 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00705038108 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613475177305 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2864019614 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.333333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0833333333 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133999831149 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515801085396 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052198274977 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0817939725897 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361122813848 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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