In many cities today, most people live in large apartment blocks. Does this kind of accommodation have more advantages or disadvantages?
Nowadays, instead of living in typical individual houses, living in apartment blocks has become increasingly popular among citizens who live in urban cities. While there are some cons of this kind of accommodation, I would argue that living in apartments is a more viable option.
There are some downsides for living in apartments. Firstly, there are less communication between neighbors of apartment units. For example, it is not uncommon to hear that people living in apartments do not even know the name of their neighbors. Secondly, residents can only enjoy limited space of living. Outdoor amenities such as courtyards and rooftops that are quite common in detached houses are not always available in apartment blocks. Finally, the cost of living in apartments tends to be much higher than living in houses. More specifically, people have to pay extra fees for the property management company for the maintenance of the security.
Despite the above arguments, I believe there are also some advantages of living in apartments. The most significant one is the increase in safety. What this means is that professional security guard corporations are usually employed by the management company of the apartment blocks for the maintenance of security. By installing surveillance cameras and disallowing unauthorized people from entering the apartments, crimes such as aggravated burglary can be efficiently reduced. Moreover, there is much less housing maintenance work needed when living in apartment units. Compared to those living in individual houses, residents of apartment units enjoy less maintenance work such as utilities supply, because these are usually supported by the property management company of the apartment blocks.
In conclusion, although there are some drawbacks of living in apartments, in order to reduce the time and effort required to maintain the safety and operation of the home, I believe that it is much sound to live in apartments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42996742671 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95605432457 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521172638436 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5607132141 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.1875 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1875 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248796895061 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823136508144 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04485896668 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151383714191 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589474172627 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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