Many companies sponsor sports as a way of advertising themselves. Some people think that it is good thing, while others think that it has disadvantages.
In India, plenty of companies encouraging sports as a marketing strategy for focusing themselves. In such cases, many people believe it is a positive way of influencing. But at the same time quite a number of people opposing as it has enormous drawbacks. To exemplify, I am going to pinpoint some of the instances in this essay.
To start with, the Indian Premier League is becoming popular among the people not only to entertain, most companies investing plenty of money and underlying this as promoting and advertising their products while telecasting the match. Even almost all the players who are playing in the match should wear a T-Shirt which is having company logos who is the sponsor for that team. As this probably denotes, how companies influences player to have their firm logos in their shirts. There by, people get attracted by the favorite player's advertisement. As a result, people giving the most preference to those products. In addition to that, the investment which is provided by the sponsors would get benefited by the way of advertising their products.
On the other hand, some other people's against sponsoring a huge amount for such sports. Because many people believe rather than spending enormous money for sports, they could sponsor it on who is longing and struggling for standards of living. Furthermore, this could uplift their financial crisis in a good manner. For instance, in 2005, Coca-Cola sponsors a 2.3 billion amount for charity. So this makes a good reputation for the company as well as may people could get good prospects.
To summarize, I accept through investing money, many firms are getting good prospects. But my suggestion would be like every company should minimize the investments on sports and contribute some part of money to poverty people, orphanage and build homes for homeless people.
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Suggestion: players'; player's
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Suggestion:
...ge and build homes for homeless people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, as a result, as well as, by the way, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12541254125 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71937181398 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57095709571 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.2040007854 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3529411765 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8235294118 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23529411765 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263031294747 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082921887042 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459449245421 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152998500915 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031996903593 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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