In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime?
How can we deal with those causes?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It can not be denied that nowadays, plethora of countries suffer from the tremendous rise in crime rates. Whether the developing third world countries, or the developed ones, both of them have witnessed the increase in the crime amount. In my opinion, the reasons lying behind this phenomenon are twofold.
To embark upon, the first reason, and not to mention being the most important as well, is the poverty due to the increasing rates of youth unemployment. Nevertheless, thousands of teenagers graduate from colleges and universities every year, however, they do not find suitable jobs to secure their financial future. In turn, they start seeking easy money through illegal channels. For instance, robbery, drug dealing and prostitution.
The second reason, is the absence of awareness and education through the media. Moreover, majority of movies produced every now and then, contain severe forms of violence and crime. In my country for example, several actors perform evil roles. Despite being imprisoned at the end of the movie, but youth focus solely on the first part, where the actor has power and money, through different forms of crime. Hence, these actors become the youth's role model, and they tend to follow their footsteps.
To overcome those causes, collaboration between governments and people should occur simultaneously. As for governments, they must provide suitable jobs to youth. Furthermore, proper censorship over media should be applied. On the other hand, it is the parents role to properly raise their children's awareness, and observe their behavior closely, specially at their adolescence.
In conclusion, although amount of crime is increasing, confronting it with every possible way will diminish it, and restore safety back.
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| 2019-11-12 | Ahmed Shehata | 84 | view |
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Suggestion: now and then
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Suggestion: youths'; youth's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, then, third, well, as for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46545454545 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74137927522 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.676363636364 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.4726568971 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4117647059 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1764705882 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7058823529 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137592403982 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0395924409833 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0346208233116 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0779339770225 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040181329895 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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