In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime ? How can we deal with those causes ?
Today, the increase in the level of crime is an alarming problem for the whole society. This is mainly due to the lack of security guarantees on street and financial conditions. However, it has some solutions which can attack this problem.
To begin with, there are many reason the percentage of crime is rising, and one of them is the low of security on the street. It is clear that most crime runs in dark streets with a low number of police officers, which makes everyone feel unsafe while walking through it, and they are getting off this street easily after conducting any criminal action. For instance, some criminals often use the night to rob in a bank or any jewelry store. Another cause is the gap of living standard between the wealthy and the poor is widening. Because of this, some poor individuals will commit any criminal action to meet their basic needs or pay debt. For instance, some poor criminals intend to steal in the bakery store to avoid being hungry if they do not have something to eat.
However, it has several solutions which can deal with this problem. First, it is clear that government should increase the level of security on the street at night by various methods, such as police patrolling and attaching more CCTV cameras on each angle of the street. As a result, it will put people off behavior criminals if they intend to act. Moreover, to deal with the poverty problem, the government should think about both increasing social benefits and creating more training programs for alleviated individuals so that they can not only get out of poverty status, but also put off criminal intentions. According to a recent study, 36% of poverty in 79 countries was escaped extreme poverty by receiving social benefits.
To conclude, the popularity of both low budget and the unsafe guarantee on the street is the main reason which led to the increase in the crime rate. Only when we have a choice to raise the police night patrol at street level and the participation of the government in raising the social benefits, will this situation be remedied.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 26, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'many reasons'.
Suggestion: many reasons
...s problem. To begin with, there are many reason the percentage of crime is rising, and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78393351801 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45995857037 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531855955679 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2815097179 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.9375 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5625 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3125 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170847558127 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562111282778 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466651363556 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100415272528 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00551137999161 0.056905535591 10% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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