As, in these days, accidents are increasing day by day at an alarming rate. In daily routine, people come through the some news of accidents. The main induce behind this is the carelessness and immature nature of adults towards the driving. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I will discuss the both opinions and my view point as well.
First of all, some masses have opinion that driving licence should be issued at the age of eighteen. Because, people have opinion that adults can be independent at the young age. They can do their daily chores by their own instead of depending on their elders. Moreover, at this age, they tend to get more freedom like they want to go for parties and outing etcetera. This can be possible only if they driving licence as they can go anywhere without forcing others to drop them. Thats why people have perception that the age eighteen is right to give licence.
Another school of thought is that age of twenty five is perfect to issue legal licence to masses. This is the age, when the person is mature and caring enough to follow the traffic and other rules. At this age, there is enough maturity level to think what kind of precautions should they take to drive safely. Furthermore, adults can learn driving skills easily due to their life experiences.
To sum up, In my country, India, driving license is issued at the age of eighteen. This law was enforced when the advancement of vehicles was come into existence. If one compare with the past, cases of accidents started to surge from the past decade. This means, there is no problem with age of people instead there is issue with the changing attitudes towards the driving. So, in my opinion, rather than focusing on the issue of licence at the particular age, people should change the attitudes towards the driving. They should give preference to the safe driving than high speed driving.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, kind of, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77134146341 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37018516924 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539634146341 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.3891272224 49.4020404114 37% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.25 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309726234859 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0956024305445 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747207243441 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174339311137 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512592720112 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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