In many countries, the legal driving age is 18 years old. Some people believe it is the right age to learn how to drive a car, whereas others say that the minimum age should be 25. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Opinions are divided on whether the legal driving age should be 18 years, or whether it should be increased to 25 years. I believe that early age is the best age to learn driving skills.
The legalization of driving age to 25 is advocated by people because of the sense of maturity level and responsible attitude in one's twenties. With regard to the former, at this age of life, one is mature enough to drive a car within the speed limit set by the roadway authorities. One starts becoming aware of the ill effects caused due to rash driving and drives the vehicle sensibly. However, the youngsters are fascinated by high-speed driving and take it as a thrilling experience and pose a threat to themselves as well as other road drivers. As far as responsibility is concerned, it is also thought that a mature person is more obliged to follow the traffic rules when on the road, and pay attention to not only one's own safety but pedestrians' safety as well.
However, the above arguments can be rejected because of the youngsters' rights and eligibility, and also due to the fact that young age is the best age for learning. As for the rights and eligibility, it is not true that youngsters are irresponsible because, at this age, they become eligible to cast a vote and are considered as responsible citizens of a nation. Therefore, if they are eligible to choose their leader, then they are also eligible to hold a driving license with a sense of responsibility. As for the idea of early age learning, the reflexes are quicker at this young age, and they also go through the driving test and training to get a driving license. Therefore, it cannot be assumed that even after passing the strict procedure, youngsters don't pay attention to road signs and their own safety.
In conclusion, I reject the idea that the minimum driving age should be increased to 25 because, at the early age of 18, the driving skills can be better developed, and also, it is the age when a person becomes eligible for other civil rights with responsibility.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 170, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to drive'.
Suggestion: to drive
...that early age is the best age to learn driving skills The legalization of driving a...
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Line 3, column 129, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...urity level and responsible attitude in ones twenties With regard to the former at t...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...afety but pedestrians safety as well However the above arguments can be rejected bec...
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Line 5, column 60, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'youngsters'' or 'youngster's'?
Suggestion: youngsters'; youngster's
...rguments can be rejected because of the youngsters rights and eligibility and also due to ...
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Line 5, column 632, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'getting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'train' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: getting
...o through the driving test and training to get a driving license Therefore it cannot b...
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Line 5, column 744, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...passing the strict procedure youngsters dont pay attention to road signs and their o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, as for, in conclusion, as well as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59888579387 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63491787123 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.437325905292 0.561755894193 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 359.0 20.2975951904 1769% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1651.0 106.682146367 1548% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 359.0 20.7667163134 1729% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 100.0 7.06120827912 1416% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381380762011 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.381380762011 0.084324248473 452% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.30013655443 0.151304729494 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123893119765 0.056905535591 218% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 179.7 13.0946893788 1372% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -284.45 50.2224549098 -566% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 142.1 11.3001002004 1258% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.88 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 24.21 8.58950901804 282% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 9.78957915832 572% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 145.6 10.1190380762 1439% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 180.0 10.7795591182 1670% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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