In many nations, plastic containers are gaining more popularity than ever before and are being used by more and more food and beverage companies. In my view, the potential drawbacks of using plastic are much greater than its positive effects.
To start with, there are glaring advantages to using plastic. One obvious benefit is that its characteristics are useful in many ways. It is mostly used for preserving food items, especially liquefied foods such as milk, water, cold drinks, and so on.In addition to this, another important advantage of using plastic material in the food and beverage industries is that it reduces the cost of packaging. In other words, plastic is cost effective and user friendly , so a plethora of companies are using it to boost their profits. For instance, the Britannia Biscuit Company uses plastic to save on the cost of packing because other materials are more expansive.
On the contrary, the negative outcomes are more significant. First, it can be tough to decompose plastic because it takes more than 400 years to decompose completely. another disadvantage is if plastic are use increase in daily usage ,then the environment would be more polluted.In other words, it leads to land pollution, and hence it is responsible for decreasing the quality of land where vegetables are grown.As a consequence, it leads to food shortages.
Numerous scientists have found that foods preserved in plastic are harmful to humans because they cause diseases like cancer.So, it is better to use other eco-friendly materials rather than plastic.For example, the medical department at Oxford University has found that 35% of cancer patients are suffering from the disease because of eating foods that were warp inside plastic over time.
To sum up, plastic usage has both benefits, such as inexpensive and easy to use , and drawbacks , such as land pollution and food shortage. In my view ,on the whole , the disadvantages outweigh th advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, so, then, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, in my view, in other words, on the contrary, on the whole, to start with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1656.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20754716981 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82139396021 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566037735849 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 98.1956144552 49.4020404114 199% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.384615385 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4615384615 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3076923077 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330396649239 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122297621331 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687335218889 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183174909696 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0790826152436 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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