In many countries recently young people have been living far from their parents from the time they began studies or work until they married. Do you think there are more advantages or disadvantages of this trend?
Youngsters nowadays have been studying and working while residing away from their parents before getting married due to their curiosity and desire to explore. Although there are living costs and cultural challenges I believe the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages.
Firstly, there is no doubt that cost of living and moving to new cities is comparatively higher than their own city. However with careful planning and arranging enough money can be beneficial prior to relocation. For example, to overcome financial crisis Indian government provided funds to students through a scheme, proving to be advantageous. This scheme has helped several brilliant minds who could not afford higher studies due to poor economic background but willing to study. Once overcoming the financial burdens the work or migrant has opened the door to a richer educational experience or an improved economic future.
Secondly, admittedly there will be cultural challenges while migrating nevertheless these must be seen as an advantage to relocating. To put differently, students pursuing studies in foreign country are more likely to learn language other than their mother tongue rendering them understanding foreign culture and tradition which is a positive development. For instance, overcoming a language barrier may be painful at first however the long term benefits of learning an international language are incredible. this is another clear advantage of relocating from their families.
To conclude, with careful planning to reduce initial expenses the financial disadvantages can be drastically reduced. In addition becoming bilingual and exploring to alien culture are clearly greater than the cost of facing challenges in their own country or city.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
... international language are incredible. this is another clear advantage of relocatin...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...vantages can be drastically reduced. In addition becoming bilingual and exploring to ali...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, while, for example, for instance, in addition, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1488.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65779467681 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93657749777 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653992395437 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0262792298 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.461538462 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175399602198 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617004708763 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705480728456 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11563699847 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0845051658936 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.