In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour.
What do you think are the causes of this?
What solutions can you suggest?
It has become a scientific fact that children's behaviour need some alterations. The world became a place where millions of young teenagers don't care about anything except for the pleasure and good time. In addition, there are many examples of schoolchildren taking advantage of drugs, alcohol and illegal substances, usually in the secluded areas near the school, or in the particular places invented for their own purposes.
The schools' organs have been largely familiar with this practice, where the young generation behave in a hasty way by hurting the other well-educated mates and influencing their personal development. Many of the victims usually report the issues but, in the most cases, the schools' attempts to root out the bully behaviour encounter serious setbacks.
In the first place, there are families whose impact plays a certain role to the schools reputation. The families are trying to convince the public organs that children will change the bad habits, by giving the unreal promises or justifications. Secondly, the educational institutions have the lack of adequate means to counter such a problem of bullying and threats to the children as their behaviour stems from the process of upbringing and premature influences. Instead of showing only disapproval, they could develop problem-oriented practice.
In my opinion, serious reforms must be considered in order to prevent children to spread the trend of menacing, joining the gangs and gathering in the remote places as well as potential dangerous activities. Schools must collaborate with public organs like the policy, courts and regional representatives to make up the efficient means for eradicating the bad habits among the children. The mechanisms for controlling must be strictly chosen and the young people must be properly treated. This should end up with the appropriate sanctions together with the positive chance for resocialization of critical individuals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 140, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...place where millions of young teenagers dont care about anything except for the plea...
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Line 3, column 101, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a hasty way" with adverb for "hasty"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...tice, where the young generation behave in a hasty way by hurting the other well-educated mate...
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Line 5, column 81, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'schools'' or 'school's'?
Suggestion: schools'; school's
...hose impact plays a certain role to the schools reputation. The families are trying to ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'well', 'except for', 'in addition', 'as well as', 'in my opinion', 'in the first place']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.262195121951 0.247107183377 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.128048780488 0.155533422707 82% => OK
Adjectives: 0.115853658537 0.0946595960268 122% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0365853658537 0.0501214627716 73% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0182926829268 0.0437548338989 42% => OK
Prepositions: 0.121951219512 0.122226691241 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0487804878049 0.0403226058552 121% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.9852638226 2.80594681477 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0243902439024 0.0326793684256 75% => OK
Particles: 0.00914634146341 0.00163938923432 558% => OK
Determiners: 0.128048780488 0.0861772015684 149% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0213414634146 0.021408717616 100% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00914634146341 0.011925033212 77% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1949.0 1933.35771543 101% => OK
No of words: 301.0 316.048096192 95% => OK
Chars per words: 6.47508305648 6.12580529183 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.435215946844 0.374742101984 116% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.335548172757 0.28420135186 118% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.24584717608 0.203846283523 121% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.159468438538 0.137316102897 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9852638226 2.80594681477 106% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.037074148 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624584717608 0.56093040696 111% => OK
Word variations: 72.0176997867 60.7387585426 119% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0891783567 81% => OK
Sentence length: 23.1538461538 20.7743622355 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6392906033 49.517814964 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.923076923 127.492653851 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 20.7743622355 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.923076923077 0.814263465372 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 56.7086634296 49.1944974215 115% => OK
Elegance: 2.36666666667 1.69124875643 140% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226409617655 0.332605444948 68% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.120738746562 0.102741220458 118% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0625037877759 0.0668466124924 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.598892915203 0.534860350844 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.176268615515 0.148594505496 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107089211721 0.134430193775 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049686696546 0.0742795772207 67% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.458023800876 0.324371583561 141% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0559829757149 0.0638462369009 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174602391915 0.228012699653 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023739248972 0.058150111329 41% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.5751503006 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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