In many countries, some students live with their families while studying, but other students prefer to attend universities in other cities.
Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Many teenagers are leaving parental nests to pursue higher studies, while others prefer to live with their families during college days. Undoubtedly, there are some disadvantages of living away from a guardian. However, I believe that the positive impacts of this trend outweighs negative ones.
Admittedly there are some basic drawbacks of the trend of staying away from the family. Firstly, college students are not mature enough to differentiate among bads or goods because of which they may start doing unethical activities. Since it is very easy to get persuaded in the adolescence, students may start consuming drugs under the influence of their peers. This might not be the case for day-scholar as the parents often keep track of their children's activities. Secondly, the teenager may get depressed as they start a new college life. Moving away from their loved ones and creating a new bond with unknown students, is not everyone's cup of tea.
Having said that, I argue that it is far more beneficial to stay in a hostel while studying. One benefit is that the students become self-reliant as they leave their parental nest. They not only start managing their monthly expenses but also start doing some basic tasks such as cleaning, laundry and sometimes even cooking. For instance, I learned to cook while staying in the hostel, during my graduation. Another advantage is that the hostelers may get more time, which otherwise would have been consumed in travelling, to get involved in extra-curricular activities. Owing to this, they, on the one hand, develop a strong bond with peers, on the other hand, develop inter-personal skills.
To conclude, leaving the family or getting involved in unlawful events are some disadvantages, whereas becoming self-reliant and more time invest in something fruitful are the advantages of the students living away from their loved ones.
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- In many countries some students live with their families while studying but other students prefer to attend universities in other cities Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 78
- In many countries some students live with their families while studying but other students prefer to attend universities in other cities Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, whereas, while, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20327868852 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74835466648 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580327868852 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1901080358 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1875 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6875 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258646726581 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763868167116 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659786290879 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173102732318 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686029286482 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.