In modern scenario, unprecedented technological advancements have modernized the present generation. In the bygone era, children enjoyed more enthusiastic as well healthy lifestyle as compared to the present generation. Nowadays juveniles are extremely reliable on junk food and and electronic gadgets. According to my perception, this definitely impacts their health and makes them prone to numerous unhygienic habits as well as further exacerbate their health causing various immunity disorders.
Commencing the discussion, nowadays innumerable adolescents demonstrate unhealthy lifestyle due to the deliberate negligence towards their habits. Firstly, with the advancement of science and technology, maximum number of children play games on computers and mobile phones rather than undertaking physical activities. Moreover, parents least bother to spend time with the children due to their hectic professional commitments. Hence, children are considerably left destitute of parental control and guidance. For instance, nowadays, adolescents spend tremendous time on mobile phones whereas forgot the significance of spending quality time with the family.
Further elucidating my perspective, increasing number of children excessively rely on unhealthy junk food rather than freshly prepared domestic meals. Consumption of inorganic ingredients cause catastrophic damages to their bodies and and also weakens their digestive system. Previous generation kids used to eat more organic items. Hence, they enjoyed tremendous health and stamina as compared to the modern generation. For instance, nowadays, children start breathing heavily even after after climbing few stairs. Apart from this, adolescents order pizzas, hamburgers and hotdogs that subsequently affects their health and cause obesity.
To recapitulate, we can conclude that modern generation children live extremely unhygienic and unhealthy lifestyle due to their negligence towards the eating habits. Considerably, this impacts their health and weakens their immunity system and also cause many health related disorders.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: and
...les are extremely reliable on junk food and and electronic gadgets. According to my per...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'parents the least'.
Suggestion: parents the least
...ertaking physical activities. Moreover, parents least bother to spend time with the children ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
...ending quality time with the family. Further elucidating my perspective, increasing ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: and
...se catastrophic damages to their bodies and and also weakens their digestive system. Pr...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: after
..., children start breathing heavily even after after climbing few stairs. Apart from this, a...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun health seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much health', 'a good deal of health'.
Suggestion: much health; a good deal of health
...ns their immunity system and also cause many health related disorders.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, whereas, apart from, as for, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1807.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.29616724739 5.12529762239 123% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98219574868 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581881533101 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.60771543086 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7476739631 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.294117647 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8823529412 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58823529412 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21117647573 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636634835444 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476539778117 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136870034973 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041402961716 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 21.4 50.2224549098 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.3 11.3001002004 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.96 12.4159519038 153% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.43 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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