In many countries today, people in cities either live alone or in small family units, rather than in large, extended family groups. Is this a positive or negative trend?
It appears that life style has changed alot today particularly the way families live in their houses. while some people prefer to live in apartments, others choose the villas as a perfect place for them. In my opinion, Each life style has its advantages and drawbacks. In this essay, I will discuss the negative and positive impact of these choices.
scientific studies shows that living in villas with your big family can protect you from psychological disorders such as depression, anxiety and social phobia, amongst others. In my case, I lived with my parents, grand parent ,aunts, uncles and their small Families in one villa. As aresult, I was able to communicate with everybody and gain self-confidence which helped me to improve my presentation skills infront of public. Despite of the benefits I gained, I suffered from being surrounded by unbearable noise due to the huge number of persons living with me.
On the other hand, living in apartement with small family guarantee for you a higher privacy, because everyone has its own space. For instance, you have your private bedroom, bathroom and kitchen. As a result, you can do whatever you want at any time of the day without waiting for your turn. However, This kind of living raise selfish kids who are not able to share as they didn’t get the opportunity to familiarise with the sharing concept in their small families.
In conclusion, you should keep contact with your big family and create strong relationships with them whether you are living with them or not.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Scientific
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e, I lived with my parents, grand parent ,aunts, uncles and their small Families i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1292.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00775193798 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64692360204 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643410852713 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1886902467 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3846153846 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15975782574 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060173174903 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493061375506 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100950556892 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377373369306 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.