In many countries, woman no longer feel the need to get married. Some people believe that this is because woman are able to earn their own income and therefore do not require the financial security that marriage can bring. To what extent do you agree?
We have observed ginormous change in the women freedom and independence during last few years. Some people are satisfied with the observation that such freedom are after-effect of humongous shift of women from homemaker to working class. This change has contributed towards their financial independence. 21st century women need not to depend on their husbands to live their livelihood. I completely agree with mentioned observation that the need of marriage for women has
reduced due to their financial freedom.
Based on the anecdotal reports available on internet, we can observe that today’s average women marriage age has reached to closure to thirties. Their focus has shifted from settling in the family after marriage to making up their own career. Looking for right groom to get marriage, who can look after them during their old age and during the time of need no more a primarily concern. They would like to become right lady indeed. Moreover, they would like to enjoy their freedom and financial situation is no more a matter of concern for them.
Further, in spite of attaining financial freedom, such delay in marriage lead them towards the situations to fulfil the natural needs, which are still not acceptable in our society. Women need to understands that marriage to just not a source of financial security for them. Making up a family and having kids gives them inner satisfaction, which cannot be achieved from money. There are certain laws of nature which everyone need to abide with. We do agree that with the growing financial independence and self confidence in women, they are contributing remarkable towards the society and become a paragon of successful women, but target to become paragon of virtue is the need of society.
In the end, we truly agree with the fact that financial security attained by the women of 21st century is remarkable achievement done which has directly or indirectly deferred their marriage age to a greater extent and abated their need of marriage to some extent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 333, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'depend'?
Suggestion: depend
...dependence. 21st century women need not to depend on their husbands to live their livelih...
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Line 1, column 472, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... that the need of marriage for women has reduced due to their financial freedom. ...
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Line 4, column 371, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('primarily') instead an adjective, or a noun ('concern') instead of another adjective.
...age and during the time of need no more a primarily concern. They would like to become right lady i...
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Line 6, column 197, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'understand'.
Suggestion: understand
...cceptable in our society. Women need to understands that marriage to just not a source of f...
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Line 8, column 22, Rule ID: AGREE_WITH_THE_FACT[1]
Message: Use simply 'agree that'.
Suggestion: agree that
...eed of society. In the end, we truly agree with the fact that financial security attained by the wome...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, so, still, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1701.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10810810811 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64790630578 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510510510511 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5519730991 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.3125 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8125 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9375 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194209739246 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696616145437 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502972594019 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120816529098 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342093952238 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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