In many countries in the world people buy clothes and choose hairstyles according to latest fashion? Why is this happening. Is this a positive or a negative development?
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Worldwide people are following latest fashion and are grooming themselves accordingly. I believe easy availability of merchandise and advertising have made these revolutionary changes. It is definitely a positive percussion both for an individual as well as for a society.
To commence with, globalization and digital technology have made a way for international businesses to flourish across various nation. Top brands, trendy clothes and style which were limited to a particular country, are now easily available in many countries. People can buy them online or from stores. Moreover, advertisements have made a greater impact on influencing people to follow fashion trends. Many celebrities are made brand ambassadors and they start advertising for the products on television, newspapers and on social media .Thus ,people become aware of what is trending in the market and certainly ,it creates an impulse in them to buy it. Perhaps ,they don’t want to get bullied for doing something which is not in fashion , so they go along with the trend.
In my opinion, this is definitely beneficial for an individual because it helps in enhancing one’s personality . People, who are up to date are always looked upon by their colleagues and friends, and are appreciated. This boosts their self confidence and mental status. To illustrate this, studies have shown that people who are stylist and trendy are more happy and cheerful. Furthermore ,due to increasing demand ,there has been a tremendous growth in the business,which ultimately has increased the rate of employment . Recruitment is needed in various sections like production, marketing ,packaging ,sales an so on . Therefore,public is being hired for the same and this has reduced the percentage of unemployed population significantly which is good for the countries development.
In conclusion, as new fashion is accessible to people due to globalisation and digital wora ld ,they can follow it with ease. It creates employment to a larger extend and also aides in boosting one’s personality and confidence ,so it is indeed a positive development
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, as for, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1802.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44410876133 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21109127102 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616314199396 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2006158831 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.111111111 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3888888889 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05555555556 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 40.0 5.01903807615 797% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182023152997 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533744202352 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404294749814 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101658032606 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0124174066173 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.