Many doctors recommend that older people exercise regularly, but most patients do not follow an exercise routine.
Why do you think this happens?
How can people be encouraged to exercise regularly?
It is suggested by many doctors that individuals who are older should exercise on regular basis, however, patients are not following this suggestion. I opine that this is because they are either not aware about the benefits of the exercises or do not have the required equipment and motivating friends. We can motivate them by providing knowledge for merits of exercise and a place where these all people can have instruments and same age people.
To initiate with, the prominent reason for not doing exercise on daily basis is that most of the people do not know the benefits of this activity. They feel that this is just frivolous activity and try to avoid it. Another reason is the lack of equipment and friends who can inspire. Generally, exercise equipment are expensive and could not afford by everyone. Moreover, they need sufficient space. For instance, a walker is required which is costlier and need a special room where we can store it. Eventually, most people avoid exercise.
Government should have myriad campaigns to mushroom awareness about these benefits. When they will know that the more exercise they do, the healthier they are. Declaring a day, for exercise could be the best encouragement. For example, 21st June was declared by Indian legislation to make people aware. Secondly, If the government can spare a small amount of space in the park for old age people where they can accommodate equipment, then old people will meet at one place and will get space, instruments and same-age friends. Ultimately, they will get all they are lacking.
In conclusion, even though people have less awareness and instrument, with proper campaigns and planning we can solve this.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02846975089 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64642376026 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551601423488 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.8770790671 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1176470588 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5294117647 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35294117647 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303895158542 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0963416144124 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0866668889348 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192875416011 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0942046254653 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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