Due to the busy schedule and hectic work environment, people are not able to focus on their health. They are not able to do routine excerise for healthier life. In these essay we will further discuss both cause and remedies for these problem.
There are numerous reason due to that a laymen is incapable of doing routine exercise. People spent their maximum time in commuting to their offices or workplace. Due to overloaded traffic and long travel time they need to prepare and start their daily life early in the morning. Monotonous late night work schedule and shift timing is another reason. People wants to spent their remaining time with family and loved once so they do not prefer to do any kind of physical work after working hours. People love to spent their leisure time in watching television or browsing social sites to stay connected with each other.
For resolution of this problem every one should prepare a time table and should follow their day activities according to the time table only. Keeping a strict schedule will help them to save some time for daily excercise. Parents should encourage self and kids to go to the garden or swimming pool or gym to keep themselves healthy and fit. Whenever a person gets sick doctors should prescribe excercise with medicine to their patients. People should make a habit of waking up early in the morning so that they can find some time for their body.
In conclusion our body is a gift which is provided by God and every one should respect these gift. We all should have a self motivation to keep ourselves healthy. Until and unless if we are not healthy enough we will not be able to achieve our goals. It is better to do excercise rather than going to a doctor.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 229, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this problem' or 'these problems'?
Suggestion: this problem; these problems
...her discuss both cause and remedies for these problem. There are numerous reason due to th...
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Line 3, column 39, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a layman' or simply 'laymen'?
Suggestion: a layman; laymen
... There are numerous reason due to that a laymen is incapable of doing routine exercise....
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Line 3, column 170, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng to their offices or workplace. Due to overloaded traffic and long travel time ...
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Line 5, column 342, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whenever” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...gym to keep themselves healthy and fit. Whenever a person gets sick doctors should presc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67868852459 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2977735973 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567213114754 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.3511754908 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.2777777778 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9444444444 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 7.06120827912 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126829885158 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0435338340402 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503691427354 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0787556775461 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239339740974 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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