Many governments invest a great deal of money in space research. What are the advantages and disadvantages of spending money on space exploration?
For generations, space research has brought about curiosity in people across the globe. Some countries allocate substantial chunk of their annual budget to study the possibilities available in the untouched territory. In this essay, I will elaborate what I consider to be the notable benefits and possible drawbacks of investing such a high amount to this cause.
With regards to the advantages of exploring other parts of our universe, there are two clear points. The predominant benefit of this activity is that it has led to major breakthrough discoveries in the field of science. We have not only found new materials and elements, but have also created useful products which help mankind. Curiosity rover, for instance, was sent to Mars last year and according to NASA, has identified new types of minerals in the soil. Another potential merit in favor of this exploration is that we can have an other planet to live on incase of unforeseen circumstances on Earth due to climate change. SapceX, for example, is one such organisation that is highly investing in colonizing Mars for the future.
On the other hand, however, there are some drawbacks to spending the taxpayers hard earned money on studying the unknown. The primary disadvantage is that it is extreemly expensive to develop rockets to send to outer space. Some governments dedicate a hefty amount towards this whereas important causes like healthcare and education get neglected. The other significant demeirt is that is very dangerous to send humans to explore the unknown. A case in point is the renowend astronaut Kalpana Singh, to was part of the spcaceship that crashed while landing on earth during the mars exploration.
In conclusion, although science and humankind are benefiting from the research conducted in this area, it is important to look at what cost are we paying for these discoveries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14379084967 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85066991024 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614379084967 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.6688310776 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.933333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26666666667 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160345158321 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456782476094 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450352405234 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0846956407386 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365141746304 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.