In modern era, the entire world is putting all their efforts in making themselves economically unassailable and in order to do so they are concentrating entirely on supporting industries to flourish them. However, many people now feel the need of paying attention towards the outgrowth of other things as well which includes culture, education and many more. I believe that our government should focus on the overall upliftment of a country and I will discuss my views regarding it further in this essay.
To embark upon, financial freedom is extremely important for the development of a nation. To elaborate it, I would like to give an example of Pakistan, since it is practically bankrupt and is dependent on America even for its basic necessities which is worrisome. It can be said explicitly that absolutely no development is happening there and due to which it's inhabitants are suffering and are being deprived from all sorts of pristine facilities which are being availed conveniently by the people of other developed and robust nations such as America, Britain, Japan etc.
On the other hand, the cultural growth is also significant because I have observed many countries which are financially sound but culturally they are very poor like America. Although, it is the most powerful nation but the residents here are deplorable and depressed due to various reasons such as broken families, receding intimacy and love between family members.
Conspicuously, I agree that the government should encourage the financial growth, but one should not forget the vitality of our culture and moral values as these are the things that act like pillars to create a racy empire and motivate its citizens to live felicitously.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 227, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...nd is dependent on America even for its basic necessities which is worrisome. It can be said expl...
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Line 3, column 574, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ons such as America, Britain, Japan etc. On the other hand, the cultural growth i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, regarding, so, well, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17857142857 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87561883313 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639285714286 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.2985642781 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.111111111 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.1111111111 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117042211877 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476058368745 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0269822402875 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0610334338209 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305190125581 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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