Many high-level positions in companies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50 per cent female. Companies should be required to allocate a certain percentage of these positions to women.
To what extent do you agree?
In India, a large number of multitude are working in multi-national companies. Despite the fact, a fair amount of company hires male staff more as compare to female staff. India is a nation who believes in equality. Therefore I strongly agree with the statement that companies should allocate a certain percentage to women for several reasons.
In the argument, Women are equally hard-working, well-educated and in addition, they are enough capable to handle any task. For example, in German companies more female staff are hired reason being, they believe that women are a more faithful resource to an organization and lifetime commitment can be expected. Other than that their potential to manage work and life is commendable.
Another factor which I personally believe why women should be hired on a management role is their patience level and thus they can be a good mentor. For example, many individuals consider, a good manager is one who has more patience and ability to understand circumstances.
To sum up all, IT is a better idea to hire more female resources in companies if we are tend to provide more comfortable and managed the environment to youth to work please fully in any organization
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
In India, a large number of multitude are working in multi-national...
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Line 1, column 145, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...amount of company hires male staff more as compare to female staff. India is a nat...
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Line 1, column 217, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...a is a nation who believes in equality. Therefore I strongly agree with the statement tha...
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Line 7, column 89, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'tended'.
Suggestion: tended
...female resources in companies if we are tend to provide more comfortable and managed...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1015.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 200.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.075 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94023383424 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 342.9 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2238287308 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.5 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173282049847 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063838401295 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052177725711 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102690806462 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223258347488 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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