Many local languages today are dying out due to the rise of languages like English.
Is this a positive or negative development?
With the advent of time, the English language is becoming more important than the native languages which have resulted in the decay of these languages. In my opinion, it is a positive development.
To begin with, many people believe it as negative development because in their point of view the local language is the representation of the culture and an identification of the region and acceptance to English which results in the depletion of these cultures. Apart from this, most people believe language a depiction of their feelings in their own ways but due English they might even lose the actual interoperation of the world as per their scenario. For instance, India is a house to 22 national languages with 100s of other local languages but the extension of English has drastically decreased the local language number because learning English has become a necessity to grab a higher job.
Despite the above-mentioned negative impact, I believe its positives overrule the negative ones. Firstly, the acceptance of one common language around the group will definitely increase the businesses because there will be no language barriers. This will also ramp up the profit to the companies which will obviously increase the revenue of the government. The government will be able to provide better services with this revenue and even can gain the trust of the people by providing them quality services such as better drinking facilities, hospital facilities, or waste disposal facilities. In other terms, a common language will not only benefits an individual or organization but directly or indirectly impact the whole world. To illustrate, around 87 percent of the offices in big cities demand English spokesmen for the company and to deal at the international level.
To conclude, acceptance to English might result in the death of many local languages even though, it paves a better way for businesses and increases the profit of companies and the government.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'negatives'?
Suggestion: negatives
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Message: The verb 'will' requires base form of the verb: 'benefit'
Suggestion: benefit
... terms, a common language will not only benefits an individual or organization but direc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, apart from, for instance, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19811320755 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89771470716 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534591194969 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.4891024672 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.75 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321863145439 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114556865566 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07104049912 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19820069009 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696271742912 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.