Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why this is the case and what be done to attract more local people to visit these places?
It is true that historical places and museums attract a large number of tourists. However, the local people show little interesting in them. In my opinion, there are several reasons behind this trend and government can take certain measures to encourage locals to visit there.
Initially, people find it very boring to visit these places. In other words, they are already familiar with their culture and history and perhaps there is nothing new for them to explore in the same museum. Therefore, they avoid going to these places as they consider such visits a waste of time. On the other hand, a tourists who is eager to explore new places in their destinations, museum or historical places will help them better understand the culture and history of the countries they are coming. Another reason is that the entrance fee of museums is also a factor that discourages locals. If a person visited it once, they would avoid visiting it again because nobody wants to pay again to watch the same artworks.
The government can take steps to encourage local residents to attend museums and historical buildings. Firstly, local authorities should hold frequent culture events and exhibitions at these locations to provide people with new experiences every time they visit there. The second solution is to provide free or discounted entry tickets on weekends so that low and middle income families can visit. For those reasons, the government can attract more locals to visit these places.
To conclude, people local do not like to visit museums and historical places because there is not so much they can learn from these places. Other aspect, expats enjoy these places as they can learn more about the culture and history of the country they visit. The government can encourage more natives to visit by conducting interesting programs like exhibitions at these places or provide free tickets.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 55, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Line 2, column 317, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a tourist' or simply 'tourists'?
Suggestion: a tourist; tourists
...its a waste of time. On the other hand, a tourists who is eager to explore new places in t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, so, therefore, in my opinion, in other words, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0608974359 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47203083976 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509615384615 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4946729269 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6875 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365156038557 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137971386604 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710795296585 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255369898171 0.151304729494 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375822007116 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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