Many nations like to host international sporting events, but people are against it. Describe both views and give our own opinion.
The most popular and awaited global sporting competition nowadays is the Olympic Games. Many countries dream to organise it, while some citizens believe that it might bring more problems than benefits. I completely disagree that the disadvantages can outweigh the advantages of hosting an event of such scale.
The biggest problem of all international events is its funding. The actual cost is often underestimated by the government leading to multi-million-dollar deficiencies. For example, Greece learnt the lesson the hard way, being left with the approximately 40-million-dollar debt after carrying out the Olympics in 2004. In many countries, almost all facilities, specially built for the event, are usually abandoned and unused due to the lack of funds to maintain them. As a result, citizens are the ones who suffer the most because of increased taxes and lower budget allocated for welfare, educational and social programmes.
However, despite all the demerits I believe there are much more evident merits. Such international contests attract many sponsors, investors, and simple spectators, thus boosting the economy and tourism of the hosting country. Organising such event in your own city facilitates to gain respect and to be remembered for decades, while adding honour and prestige to the whole country. As a consequence, the nation flourishes and establishes itself on the international arena.
In conclusion, although the global sporting competitions tighten the country's budget I think we should be proud to host such events because they promote our country globally and bring positive impact in many areas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, thus, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11800192431 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0880687292 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.538461538 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2307692308 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140678963654 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474303012005 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412304758429 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.085126195197 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025780989457 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.45 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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