Many newspapers and magazines feature stories about the private lives of famous people. We know what they eat, where they buy their clothes and who they love. We also often see pictures of them in private situations.
Is it appropriate for a magazine or newspaper to give this kind of private information about people?
Nowadays, a lot of magazines features stories about famous film stars, politicians, musicians and other celebrities. It has become a routine in newspapers, magazines and TV programs. A lot of pepople would like to know how others live, about their lives, what they do, what they eat, how they spend money and, in fact, how do they make such big money. However, not all of these stories are trully and journalists can make a star or a piece of crap of almost every famous man or woman.
Factually, every magazine has interesting stories or facts about famous people. They print their photos, make interesting articles and content in order to sell more and more products. On the one hand, it is good that they reveal a lot about anyone famous. We can try star's prompts to be really good at something. The way they train themselves to be more desirable for others is definitely good. They share their experience, tell about obstacles they collide in everyday life. I think, it is a good experience we can get from people living in luxury. In my opinion, journalists make nice content for everybody. Unfamiliar experience is also experience.
On the other hand, there is a lot of magazines writing only bad stories about celebrities, printing their private photos bought from the hackers. However, these stories can reveal them or make them famous. People are loving to read about it and they do buy a lot of magazines with these articles. But, as for me, I think it is inappropriate to show private photos of stars in magazines. There is a lot of children reading it and stars can become passionate by them in the most dirty way (if know what I mean). Private life of every person is his or her own business and mass media has no right to meddle.
In conclusion, I would say that there are no terms whether it is right or wrong to write about famous people. The more people buying magazines about it, the bigger is the amount of the journals printed. A request generates offer, that is how it works. If somebody wants to know more about nature, they buy journal about flora and fauna of our planet. If someone wants to know the dirty facts about famous people, they buy magazines like these. Every person is free to decide what to read.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 214, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...reveal them or make them famous. People are loving to read about it and they do buy a lot ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, really, so, as for, i mean, i think, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1843.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 398.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63065326633 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47778060619 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489949748744 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 587.7 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9317700754 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.72 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.92 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.403941856915 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105903481335 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694687641836 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254422740492 0.151304729494 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0118378590223 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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