Many newspapers and magazines print stories about famous people and their personal lives ,i am in complete agreement with this statement
Famous people actor ,Film star ,politicians, are always on screen ,Yeas it true that people want to know about them and they influence people lives however we should remember that they are also human being they have their personal life like us.
Hence on one like to share there personal live , To illustrate this , there is example in past that a magazine reporter used hidden camera to take photos of actor with his family , and magazine published these photos and it caused problems in
actor family life
Not only actress but politicians also face this kind of problems , this kind of nonsense reporting hurts their image in people
I my opinion new laws should be come to tackle this problem ,it is good to ask before take some one photo
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 745.0 1615.20841683 46% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 151.0 315.596192385 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93377483444 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 4.20363070211 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2507161538 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 176.041082164 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662251655629 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 506.74238477 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 16.0721442886 12% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 75.0 20.2975951904 370% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.5 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 372.5 106.682146367 349% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 75.5 20.7667163134 364% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.0 7.06120827912 297% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216529090007 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.179907612856 0.084324248473 213% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117571484722 0.0667982634062 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112496921319 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0905483242258 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.5 13.0946893788 302% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -4.65 50.2224549098 -9% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.5 11.3001002004 288% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.5 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.49 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 78.4519038076 38% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 9.78957915832 271% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 32.0 10.1190380762 316% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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