Many people are now opting to provide technology companies with their personal data
in exchange for access to software.
Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Undoubtedly, in order to grab the software, there is an escalated tendency of sharing the confidential information with IT companies. Even though leaking out of personal data would be one of pivotal issues, the assets associated with sharing of information outscores the prejudices as the organisations get acquaint the potential user with numerous updations of software.
Since the customers furnish all the personal details while registering at website of software , thus the software vendor have all the private information which they usually expose with others with their consent of owners. Seeming, the Tech Companies are stealing the private information with legal procedures and selling it on exorbitant prices to the advertisement world. Consequently, the commoners get annoyed when they receive countless emails and calls from advertisers. Also, it is biased to overlook the fact
documented by American Customer Care Council that the Facebook sells confidential data of facebook users to the big advertisement
companies to generate their income.
On the other side, with the help of these information, software sellers generally make aware client about their products. The company updates them information how to use the software, what are recent updates, what are the discounts and so on. As a result, the client are apprised with ample information which eventually enhance the horizon of knowledge. To exemplify, as per the survey conducted by New York Times, in the gone calendar year, around 90 percent of customer admit that regular emails from software
companies would aware them about recent updation in the existing product line.
In conclusion, although this trend invade the privacy of customer by making exploring it out, the merits are overlooked every demerits as it is one of the impeccable measures to communicate with customer about the latest modification.
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| 2020-04-05 | somu | 83 | view |
| 2020-04-04 | cpanavdeeppuri@gmail.com | 78 | view |
| 2019-06-18 | drtruong92 | 78 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, look, so, thus, while, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54639175258 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91423667193 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601374570447 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.25665972 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.727272727 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4545454545 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163245046957 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591715659138 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358752359288 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0777050976751 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376103718559 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.57 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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