The obesity level among people around the world has increased at a higher rate due to the sale of processed food in the market. This essay completely believes that eating such food has negative impact on the lifestyle of youngsters as it is difficult to digest as well as people are lazy to cook healthy food at home.
The processed food which is currently trending in the market is impacting the health of the society. The level of sugar content and vegetable oil used to cook the food is at the high end due to which it is very difficult to digest such food. The indigestion leads to weight gain in the body and affects the heart and other organs of the body. For instance, a study shows that in US, 98% of the people consume McDonalds burger and other dishes due to which the obesity among the young generation is at the peak.
In addition to this, the subsidized outlet are constructed all across of the city either on the petrol stations or inside shopping malls food courts which makes it easy to grab. These stalls provide take away service in a min or two which make the young generation very lethargic to cook healthy food at home as it need more time to do grocery shopping and then preparation. In Asian countries like India, the trend of cooking at home is very common due to which the health of the Asian people is better than the western countries.
To conclude, the market of processed food is growing faster due to cheap and easy to grab food at any time of the day. In spite of this, it is drastically affecting the health of the people due to the unhealthy food items and cooking methods.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 242, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... is very difficult to digest such food. The indigestion leads to weight gain in the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, well, for instance, in addition, as well as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44594594595 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32644466455 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489864864865 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 32.721464131 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.636363636 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9090909091 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36363636364 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23191203048 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0984173462431 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533454084091 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163611209283 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440108318903 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.83 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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