In today's competitive world salary is the prime factor for an individual before shortlisting the opportunities in career. To maintain the family needs and social status, a good job with sufficient earning is significant. This essay insights how money and other reasons play a deciding reason for a person while accepting a job offer.
First and foremost, the market is growing at faster pace which directly impact the cost of basic necessities for a person to survive with their family in the metro cities. The food, cloth and shelter cost touched the sky hence a working professional need to step out of their comfort zone and hunt for a well paid job in the market. For example, A salary package for an IT professional with an experience of 5-7 years is INR 10 lakh/year through which all the family needs like home rent,schooling fees etc need to be paid. Though money is one of the deciding factor before accepting the offer, there are other considerations also.
In addition to above, family future security is form of mutual funds, LIC, pension etc can be only possible if individual is highly paid as a maintaining both current expenditure with future saving is required to sustain. Including this, job role satisfaction is another rationale for obtaining an opportunity in career. The benefits provided by an organization to their employees hold a strong reason for long time engagement between them. For example: Government companies provide Cost of living allowance, medical allowance, travel allowance, bonus etc to their employees due to which a very few resignations were seen in past few years.
It is clear than money is a key factor for a person as life runs on that as well as there are other considerations to be done before welcoming any opportunity in career.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 92, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
... pace which directly impact the cost of basic necessities for a person to survive with their fami...
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Line 3, column 368, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: an; IT
...rket. For example, A salary package for an IT professional with an experience of 5-7 ...
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Line 3, column 488, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , schooling
...hich all the family needs like home rent,schooling fees etc need to be paid. Though money ...
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Line 3, column 627, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...e offer, there are other considerations also. In addition to above, family future...
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Line 5, column 285, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...le satisfaction is another rationale for obtaining an opportunity in career. The...
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Line 7, column 45, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s clear than money is a key factor for a person as life runs on that as well as t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, so, well, while, for example, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96333333333 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85729281353 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576666666667 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.1220237018 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.083333333 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202143201805 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078532143462 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0265999907211 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128767857132 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00957718000403 0.056905535591 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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