Many people believe that countries should produce food for the whole population and import as little food as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Majority of individuals are of the opinion that nations should produce food for its citizen, and reduce food importaion to the barest minimum. The positive and negative impact of this will be discussed in this essay.
To begin with, countries producing their own food have a range of the benefits for the wider economy, from boosting the economy financially, to encouraging the patronage of locally produced food-items and also increasing the internally generated revenue of the country. For instance, The ban placed on the importation on rice in Nigeria recently has increased the purchase of local rice across the country.
Furthermore, it will boost the agricultural sector of the economy and perhaps enhance the productivity of smallholders.
In as much as limiting the importation of good has benefits, the drawbacks are not far-fetched.
It might lead to the high-pricing of the agricultural products. In this case, the ban on the importation of rice in Nigeria increased the price of home-produced rice from #16,000 to #23,000. This will most likely have an effect on the common man that feeds from hand to mouth because he might not be able to afford it.
In addition, it could also lead to consumption of less-healthy food because the food produced might not be up to international standard.
Overall, Counties restricting importation of agricultural products and producing their food might have positive impacts on the economy as a whole and could increase the efficiency of farmers. In spite of the benefits, it could cause an increase in the cost of food items and lead to the consumption of contaminated products.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, so, for instance, in addition, in spite of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18490566038 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04145793299 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490566037736 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.011750809 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.5 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206756495906 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750353366024 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746490393039 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0985718512099 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667168855521 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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