Many people believe that having a fixed punishment for all crimes is most efficient. What are the advantages and disadvantages of having fixed punishment?
In order to maintain the law and order of the society criminals should be given severe punishment as per the crime committed by them. Some people reckoned that fixing the type of punishment for each crime would be more effective rather others have a viewpoint that like reason, motive, and circumstances. In my opinion, the above-mentioned factor should be considered before giving punishment and this essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of fixed punishment.
To begin with, the first and foremost advantage of fixing the punishment will make the trail fast as the same punishment will be given to all the similar crimes. This will enhance the efficiency of the judgment. The judge only required to pronounce the verdict as punishment is already been in the law books. Furthermore, this will decrease the law conflicts as punishment will be consistent. For instance, the examination of sex of fetal during the pregnancy is prohibited but if any doctor is caught doing it, he will lose his doctor permit and will be sent to the jail for 10 years as per the law.
However, fixing punishment is not logical as human behavior is prone to changes as per the circumstances. Crime is not different, they only difference is in the situation and intention. For instance, one may murder the other intention in the greed of money rather than other committed the murder in order to save his life from the person. In the above mention example, both people committed the same crime but one has an illicit purpose but others done the same in his own defense. In this case, if both will be considered for the same punishment then it will be unfair for the latter. Therefore, it evident serious ethical issues may arise in case punishment will be fixed.
To conclude, in my opinion, the judge should consider the various factors which lead to the crime before going the final judgment. Moreover, fixing punishment does not make sense as circumstances may vary for a crime for two persons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89085545723 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72100829618 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501474926254 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5485338052 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.625 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1875 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298097668166 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104320688942 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775691420594 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197614962354 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586345292542 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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