Wearing a school uniform is an issue that has both supporters and opponents. It is a well-known fact that children wear a uniform while going to school. However, there are some who are of an opinion that teachers should also have a dress code. I personally feel that teachers should also have a uniform to work in their daily routine of life.
The primary reason for the teacher to wear a uniform is that students often treat their teachers as role models. Therefore, a student who is not willing to conform to the dress code might start following it when he sees his teacher adopting the rule. Secondly, the dress code would help to break the differences with the colleagues. For example, some of the teachers might be rich and they would like to exemplify this in the dress they wear. This would, in turn, make the other teacher feel inferior and it results in poor quality work and less motivation.
Finally, a uniform would help the students to distinguish between their teachers and outsiders. Nowadays, most of the schools do not have high security and adults may step in schools to commit crimes. The uniform would help the students to identify whether the person is their teacher or not.
I conclude that teachers should also have a uniform just like students do and the institutions should properly implement this as a rule in all the schools.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: some
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1125.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74683544304 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45304132447 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518987341772 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 333.9 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.3567100712 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.5384615385 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2307692308 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253723366674 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101717531664 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490316451981 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154282911409 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597111045892 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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