Many people believe that increasing levels of violence on television and in films is having a direct result on levels of violence in society. Others claim that violence in society is the result of more fundamental social problems such as unemployment.
How much do you think society is affected by violence in the media?
It is a popular belief, that TV series and thriller movies of the crime genre', are responsible for the alarming rate of violence we see in today's world. However, critics argue that the lack of employment is the force driving up the crime rate. I concur with the view that access to the screenplay version of criminal cases, presented through various media sources, significantly attributes to the increased violence in contemporary society.
Firstly, the lack of earning opportunities, indeed, is one of the reasons why people are tempted to follow the criminal path. In addition, the societal taboo associated with unemployment forces them to follow the usual dark alleys of quick-money making. To illustrate how levels of employment can drastically change the lawlessness rate, a decade-long experiment, was conducted in the slums of New York city. It was observed that youngsters who were given a chance to join the workforce, pulled themselves away from the company of their still-staying-criminal background friends. Hence, this clearly depicts that lawlessness is inversely proportional to the employment levels of any place.
Secondly, the indelible influence that murder-mysteries and money-heists themed movies have on the youngsters, cannot be overlooked. While on the one hand, such shows and films are usually blockbuster hits, but on the other hand, many criminals take cue from them. To illustrate further, a recent survey by a leading investigative agency, showcased how almost 80% of the convicts planned their crimes based on a similar movie or series.
To conclude, it is fair to state that tools like the TV & movies that we have created are slowly eroding the social fabric of the peaceful society we once lived in. Therefore, It is imperative that the government and the rating agencies, make sure that such thrillers are rated, age-appropriate to curb the ever increasing crime amongst the youngsters.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33442622951 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14226349919 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639344262295 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.7764849043 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.153846154 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152573128136 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419807266897 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0285186736541 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0773890407324 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00923056740733 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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