Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children.
To what extent do you agree?
Nowadays, celebreties are increasignly apprear in media in order to showcase their lifesyte to the public.Many critics believe that this immence media presence of imminent figures can negatively impact the children. I stronlgy support his view and this essay will discuss the reasons pertaining to my opinion.
To begin with, celebreties influence the thinking and lifestyle of children to a large extend. They uses traditional media such as television as well as social medias to reach to childrens who are easily swayed away with fake advertisements and their programmes. consequently yougsters loose their focus on studies and they create problems to their parents and teachers. To illustrage, students usually fail in their exam due to the overusage of smartphones which they use to follow celebreties through online applications such as instagram.
Another point to consider is, children try to imitate celeraties to gain fame so that they can appear in media. To achieve that, they argue with parents and relatives for follwoing famous people's luxurious lifestyle. As a result, child makes unnecessary demands to their parents which may not be affordable for them.Such crisis often seen in middle class and poor families. Aftermath of this could be disasterous results for the families and relatives as children may show unpresidented mental behavours.
To conclude, Despite the fact that, fame of celebreties in media and internet might help people in some way, effects on most of the children particularly lower class families are detrimental. Hence, parents, teachers and authorities must restrict their child from media and similerly media need to regulate the unnecessary programmes of celebreties which may be harmful for society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, hence, if, may, so, well, as to, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48148148148 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91653438853 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622222222222 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8962100934 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.333333333 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144081538061 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525180703173 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537561324503 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0935850879929 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365986089543 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.28 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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