Nowadays people are over embitious towords their children . Parents always worried about their children that any person never cheat for money matter in their children's life .Today era children are very spendthrift so parents always want that their children were save money for their better future.Now i discuss about money matter in abbreviate way by my opinion.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: Mehdi.Babaie
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 58, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...re over embitious towords their children . Parents always worried about their chil...
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Line 1, column 173, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...for money matter in their childrens life .Today era children are very spendthrift ...
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Line 1, column 175, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Today
...r money matter in their childrens life .Today era children are very spendthrift so pa...
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Line 1, column 263, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'saved'.
Suggestion: saved
...ts always want that their children were save money for their better future.Now i dis...
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Line 1, column 298, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Now
...were save money for their better future.Now i discuss about money matter in abbrevi...
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Line 1, column 302, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... save money for their better future.Now i discuss about money matter in abbreviat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 10.4138276553 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 41.998997996 17% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 326.0 1615.20841683 20% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 61.0 315.596192385 19% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34426229508 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.79468239267 4.20363070211 66% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29893881324 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 45.0 176.041082164 26% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.737704918033 0.561755894193 131% => OK
syllable_count: 97.2 506.74238477 19% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 124.763776794 49.4020404114 253% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 108.666666667 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.06120827912 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278667478574 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128546382538 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112484573095 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141270715721 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141270715721 0.056905535591 248% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 14.0 78.4519038076 18% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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