Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on individuals and the society.
To what extent do you agree?
The world today now has become like a huge cascade of interconnected cells due to the advancement in social media platforms like Facebook, MySpace and so on. In my opinion this leap of technology has badly effected on people from every walks of life.
Some people believe that spending time and money each and everyday on such platforms is a definition of their intellect and sophistication. They believe such platforms keep us connected but they spend inane amount of time everyday surfing through the mundane details of things which are neither useful nor knowledgeable. For example, the videos and information circulating on Facebook are often fasle and misleading which can impact negatively and create confusion. Supporters of social media deny that spending any amount of time surfing at one place has put people at increased risk of diseases such as diabetes and heart diseases.
I whole heartedly believe that such platforms are problematic for people at every age. Moreover, the increased risk of secuirty specially for teenagers meeting with people alone whom they have befriended without the knowledge of their guardians cannot be emphasised enough. The consequences of it can be horrendous. Additionally, people are so engrossed posting and interacting on such platforms they usually ignore their friends and family which inturn has negatively impacted the communities and inturn society as a whole. It is likely that such platforms can also distrupt the political campaigns as it was recently discovered.
To conclude, social media platforms are distruptive for every functioning of human lives such as social, health. I support that these have negatively impacted as individuals and society as a whole.
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| 2019-04-10 | insidematrix | 67 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 201, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[16]
Message: Did you mean 'badly affected'?
Suggestion: badly affected
... my opinion this leap of technology has badly effected on people from every walks of life. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, for example, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36900369004 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90655472127 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571955719557 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7823868136 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.923076923 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206040102696 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767816950402 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453613705777 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133606318794 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394519168826 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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