Social networking portals brought profound changes in the ongoing world. It is argued that social networking sites brought negative impact on both individual and community. From my perspective I completely disagree with the given statement. Surfing in social media enriches command of students, employs, politicians and many other in their particular filed.
Social network benefits one individually and society also. People can get huge knowledge by using social applications like Instagram, Facebook, twitter, WhatsApp etc. For example, using twitter helps to gain information regarding any type of sector such as education, job opportunities, political events. In the present competitive world social networks plays a crucial role in development of people. Moreover, one can get information about any programs held in their surrounding and all over the world with an ease. For instance, the government sectors and private units announce news about their job opportunities, achievements sand developments by using social networks effectively. There are an entirely set of reasons to strengthen my view point.
Social web platforms spread a plethora of data of local, national and international news easily. One can get entertainment news, political news, weather news in the one and only platform that is social media. which is very cheap and any one can access to social apps in a fraction of seconds. Furthermore, the pupils can collect the information about their present studies and future education intuition effortlessly in social sites.one clear example is few sophisticated universities provide vast information about the course and openings held in the university in their Facebook pages with appropriate pictures which attract the students.
To conclude, social network platforms benefits all types of communities in their own way. People by using social media can grab huge information about all type activities running in the present world.
- The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. 78
- The government should allocate more funding to teach science rather than other subjects in order for a country to develop and progress. To what extent do you agree? 56
- Both government and individuals are spending too much money protecting animals and their habitat. This money should be better spent dealing with fundamental issues in society such as poverty and health care. To what extent do you agree?
- More and more business and individuals are choosing to communicate either professionally or socially using technology rather than being face to face. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using technology for communicating 78
- Both government and individuals are spending too much money protecting animals and their habitat. This money should be better spent dealing with fundamental issues in society such as poverty and health care. To what extent do you agree? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...many other in their particular filed. Social network benefits one individually...
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...k benefits one individually and society also. People can get huge knowledge by using...
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... social networks effectively. There are an entirely set of reasons to strengthen my view point....
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... pictures which attract the students. To conclude, social network platforms b...
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...ivities running in the present world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, moreover, regarding, second, so, then, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67118644068 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98568065898 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593220338983 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 64.0856369098 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4117647059 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3529411765 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41176470588 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155733649929 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647061793095 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755658223223 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113657417493 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602076549596 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.31 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.1 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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