Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have a huge negative impact on both individuals and society.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Social media is the form of communicating with friends around the world. It has become one of the top forms of communication even above the phone. With the benefits of global communication, however, come risks and negative impacts.
One of the negative effects of social media is that it leads to addiction. Spending countless hours on social media can divert their attention from a particular task. It lowers the motivational level of the people, especially teenagers and students. They mainly rely on technology instead of learning the practical knowledge. This will make students lazier and their creativeness will never shower to everyone.
Another reason being that kids greatly affected by social media especially by social networking sites because today’s generation is very much addicted to Facebook, twitter and Instagram. The reason is that sometimes person shares videos or photos on social networking sites that contain violence and sex which can damage the behaviour of teenagers. It put the negative impact on the society as these kids can involve themselves in crime related activities.
Moreover, it diminishes the privacy as sharing information on social media can pose a threat to them. Sometimes, even with highest security, your personal information may leak on social sites which always creates a mess and poses a threat to a person. Anyone can download the photos and videos in just a few clicks. According to a 2010 Northeastern University and Max Planck Institute for Software Systems study, researchers created an algorithm to discover an individual's personal attributes by examining the one thing that most people leave public even when all other privacy settings are placed: their friend list. Using the algorithm, researchers could infer many personal traits merely from friend lists, including educational level, university attended, hometown and other private data.
Another downside of Social Media is that it has a huge impact on health. The less person moves the more weight that person likely to gain and few calories are burned while the person is working in front of the computer. Computer monitors have proven to cause the eye strain while working which leads to reducing of eyesight of a person. The Little movement also leads to muscle weakness, less muscle development and sometimes cause bone loss.
It leads to social detriments such as cyber bullying which is the use of electronic communication to bully someone by sending threatening messages and sending intimidating which cause emotional trauma in someone’s mind and sometimes even leads to suicide. 49.5% of students reported victimisation by bullying online and 33.7% admitted to online bullying. A 2012 study found that at least 800,000 minors had been harassed on Facebook. According to one report, 15% of adult users said that something that happened online caused a friendship to end. 12% of adult users said something that happened online caused a face-to-face argument, and for 3% of adults, it turned into a physical confrontation. Use of social media can correlate the personality and brain disorders like poor social skills, a need for instant gratification and other emotional distress like depression, anxiety and stress.
Like all things, social networking can be the benefit in moderation but unfortunately, moderation and networking do not coincide today’s society. Social networking allows for unnecessary risks in privacy, safety, social skills, and health. Networking, at best, offers ease of communication that social skills deteriorate, and at worst, is dangerous for children and networkers unaware of the predators lurking in the network.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 119, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the highest'.
Suggestion: with the highest
... pose a threat to them. Sometimes, even with highest security, your personal information may...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, at least, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 41.998997996 171% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3110.0 1615.20841683 193% => OK
No of words: 573.0 315.596192385 182% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42757417103 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89258810929 4.20363070211 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84435163396 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 313.0 176.041082164 178% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546247818499 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 962.1 506.74238477 190% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 16.0721442886 180% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.389214994 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.24137931 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7586206897 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.31034482759 7.06120827912 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 18.0 3.9879759519 451% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171005526057 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0415573688605 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381541137836 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0786416454881 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461818006091 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 171.0 78.4519038076 218% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 119, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the highest'.
Suggestion: with the highest
... pose a threat to them. Sometimes, even with highest security, your personal information may...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, at least, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 41.998997996 171% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3110.0 1615.20841683 193% => OK
No of words: 573.0 315.596192385 182% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42757417103 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89258810929 4.20363070211 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84435163396 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 313.0 176.041082164 178% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546247818499 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 962.1 506.74238477 190% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 16.0721442886 180% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.389214994 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.24137931 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7586206897 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.31034482759 7.06120827912 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 18.0 3.9879759519 451% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171005526057 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0415573688605 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381541137836 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0786416454881 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461818006091 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 171.0 78.4519038076 218% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.