Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree?
Computerization has led to the massive use of social networks among people. I firmly believe this has had enormous adverse effects both on the person and the whole society.
On a micro level, networking applications have a negative effect on one’s achievement. To be more precise, these applications are designed to be addictive in order to bring loyal users and a sustainable revenue stream accordingly. This key feature makes people waste their time online, which could be spent on a more appropriate way. For example, I spent more than twenty hours online on a weekly basis last year which was obviously enough to learn a new language. Hence, although it may connect people from all over the world, it is too time-consuming which hinders us from more important tasks.
On a macro level, people are persuaded to post some fancy pictures of their quality times that results in the great depression in society. In other words, users unconsciously compare their lives with the images they may see online and the gap makes them unhappy which can lead to depression in long term. On the other hand, eventually, some may lose their ability to enjoy the moment because they are always concerned about their posts and likes. My teenage cousin, for instance, is a Facebook lifestyle blogger that suffers from obesity caused by depression.
In conclusion, I completely agree with the idea that social networks have had more negative effects than positive outcomes on both society and users. Obsessive mental preoccupation which prevents the person from the living moment now and massive widespread sadness could be named as some catastrophic affections.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, hence, if, may, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12222222222 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73298452055 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625925925926 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.3990886559 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 106.384615385 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136525978644 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536896225021 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732273908378 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0985674138154 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608093376306 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.