Existence of both father and mother is predominant as they both play their own significant role in rising up their child. Although, a plethora of societies consider mothers to be the better parent as compared to men in order to bring up their ward while others believe that both men and women are at the same stage of perfection in parenting. However, this essay will discuss how ladies play a title role in upbringing their children.
On one hand, certain people state that the unlike fathers, mothers possess personal traits like being sensitive, caring, loving, et cetera, which enhance their importance and push their role to a greater extent in up-keeping process of children. Moreover, women are less self-centered and directed towards high success than those of men. Also, males generally possess a behavior of short-temperament and arrogance which sometimes prove to be risky for wards as they may also acquire the behavior identical to that of their parent. Thus, females owe many qualities which are beneficial for children whereas the qualities possessed by males are not given any place.
On other hand, another bunch of folks opine that both men and women are equally good in case of fostering their children because they both want their wards to be noble persons and provide them with all the facilities they are able to buy. In addition, the nature of men have been changed nowadays as compared from the time of antiquity due to which they are now become able to understand the feelings, emotions, reactions and activities of their ward. For instance, a numerous companies of various countries allot males as child-careers to the parents in their need. That is why; males as well as females are good at parenting to an equal extent.
In conclusion, a lot of individuals consider women to be good parent while others believe that men and women both are equally good as their respective positions. However, in my opinion, mothers make better parents as compared to men.
- Being a celebrity such as a famous film star or sports personality- brings problems as well as benefits.Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems? 61
- At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of oler people.Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages? 67
- In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is, therefore, necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
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- Scientist agree that people are damaging their health by eating too much junk food. Some people think that the answer to this problem is to educate people. Others think education will not work. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 478, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'company'?
Suggestion: company
...of their ward. For instance, a numerous companies of various countries allot males as chi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, whereas, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96396396396 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6275435422 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54954954955 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.8154643989 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.153846154 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6153846154 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2307692308 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273150526771 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106497103487 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708921408673 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191069545942 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621520230766 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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