Many people cannot speak or present well in public. An idea is to start training from school.
Do you agree or disagree?
The ability to speak and present in front of the public is an essential skill for people in the
twenty-first century. Although some people are afraid to deliver speeches to a large crowd,
this fear can be avoided by starting this training from school. This essay will explain why I
completely agree that proper training from school is one of the best ways to overcome the
phobia of public speaking.
There are numerous reasons why individuals should take public speech and presentation
training from school. The primary reason is skills that people learn in their early childhood
tend to continue in their future. More specifically, confidence is one of the most essential
skills which is mandatory to speak in front of the public, and this skill can easily be obtained
from school if it would be part of the academic curriculum. For example, when European
countries included presentation skills as part of their personality development training, the
students started to perform well in front of the public. Therefore, it is always a good idea to
start public presentation training from school.
Likewise, a secondary reason is that public speaking is a mandatory skill when it comes to
job search. Skills that are necessary to get a job should be taught in school in order to
perform well in interviews, especially when it comes to industries such as information
technology, sales, and teaching. In the United States of America, many of their organizations
use applicants’ presentation skills to filter relevant candidates from the candidate pool,
which is a portal where individuals apply for jobs. If people are not learning presentation
skills at school, then they might not get a job. Clearly, presentation and speaking in front of
the public are necessary to get a job and build confidence, and this training should start
from school.
In conclusion, this essay explained the reasons why public presentation skill is mandatory. In
my opinion, one of the best ways to avoid public speaking fear is to include relevant training
in the academic curriculum.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1828.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34502923977 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91146005253 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461988304094 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7996308738 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.571428571 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4285714286 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 24.0 4.38176352705 548% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355872046233 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140037465176 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0769637072528 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107497540992 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0942850820797 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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