It is true that some of the people know from an early age what career they will follow, and they are happy to allocate their life for the same profession. While I agreed that their may suit many people. But the others getting satisfaction by seeking or changing job life. So, I decided I will explain my both point of views.
On the one hand, for many people decided career path can be a way of getting satisfying working life. Myriad people have their own dream about career from childhood. In that case they one determines to achieve the goal with commitment of afford, hard work and times. After getting their wish job the feeling is live dream came to. It also like rearward for them. So, they are not getting any interest for changing job. For example, many children dream to be a doctor from their childhood. But fulfilling the ambition they have to make themselves qualified for it. They have to spent lot of time from early adulthood with afford. After reaching their goal because of all the attempt they have no intention of changing job.
On the other hand, nowadays people have different opinion on career path. Firstly, everybody is not getting their satisfying job early age. They have to change job for finding that. Secondly, some people think that doing some job for long time killing creativity. Finally, job satisfaction is often the result of working condition rather than come itself. For instance, open minded boss good relationship with colleagues also bring happy working life.
In conclusion, following a particular career may be suitable for many. However, I believe that it is not only way of accessing happy working life.
- Foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes.Do you agree or disagree? 61
- Many people decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it. This they argue leads to a more satisfying working life.To what extent do you agree with this view? What other things can people do to have a satisfying working life? 61
- You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. 73
- Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single.Some People say that this information may be relevant and useful.Others disagree.Discuss both these view 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
It is true that some of the people know from an early age what care...
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Line 1, column 156, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ate their life for the same profession. While I agreed that their may suit many peopl...
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Line 3, column 268, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...mitment of afford, hard work and times. After getting their wish job the feeling is l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83802816901 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38699154277 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545774647887 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.1552206106 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.4545454545 106.682146367 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.9090909091 20.7667163134 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320852210389 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0931425718413 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674858417394 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194281335641 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585196753099 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.9 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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