Nowadays high-rise building are increasing more and more in the central city and people start living there instead of traditional construction on ground. While some people think that the people who stay in condo may feel lonely and unhappy. I believe that everythings have some positive and negative sides. So, I will give my both point of views in the topic.
On the one hand, staying in sky touch building become a popular trend in modern society, because their are various kinds of benefit. Normally, like that building are located central of the town as a result all kinds of transportation is easy available. So, people can visit any place like office, school, shopping mall very easily without wasting time. It make people life easy, happy and enjoyable.Moreover, choosing a apartment give a high class lifestyle by providing different kinds of facilities like gyms, water pools, clubs. All those things also help to maintain society. For example, if any one visit gym or clubs they can make new friends and maintain society as well.
On the other hand, there are arguments that, people who stay in condo they feel lonely. In some cases it is true because apartment people are usually taking their room in rent after moving and they do not have relation with neighbors. Fully new place sometimes it become hard to make friends. Meanwhile, they feel lonely and depressed.One more point can be added that, thought smart condo are expensive, but all the rooms are almost some in the whole building as a result there are no option of personal test. Besides of this owner take maintenance fee in the renovate time without giving limit. Another side, all the apartment have strong rules regulation. which any people have to follow for staying. Result of it people became unhappy in the high profiled apartment.
In conclusion, I want to tell that both sides are equally strong but it depends on person to person preference, how who want to choose their living.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: there
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Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...ll very easily without wasting time. It make people life easy, happy and enjoyable. ...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...py and enjoyable. Moreover, choosing a apartment give a high class lifestyle b...
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Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...neighbors. Fully new place sometimes it become hard to make friends. Meanwhile, they f...
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Suggestion: Which
...apartment have strong rules regulation. which any people have to follow for staying. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in some cases, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91044776119 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40058283559 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579104477612 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.6814961252 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.3333333333 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9523809524 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205107595996 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557513431676 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561843158894 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0998473715982 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0893752963038 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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