Many people prefer to live in those countries which offer hot climate whereas others like to live in cold climate.
Discuss both the view points.
It is irrefutable that climate plays a vital role in the holistic development of human beings. A section of society prefers to reside in cold temperature while others go for hot. This essay shall scrutinize both the perspectives in ensuing fragments.
First and foremost benefit of living in hot weather is that it acts as a panacea for people with health issues. To be more precise, warm climate is considered best from health point of view as many people endure with aches, rheumatoid arthritis and many more. Hence, staying in hot temperature is boon as per the body temperature. Not only this but one can also derive directive vitamin D which strengthens the bones. Tourist from your European countries, for instance, go to Thailand twice a year to get a requisite sunshine which paramount is the need of human body. In the same case, one can enjoy the expression of freedom of wearing the light clothes which are economically to purchase as well.
However,cold weather is centre of attraction for maximum tourists and can enjoy a unique outdoor activities like snow skiing, paragliding and so on, therefore, one feels physically fit and mentally agile. What is more, people are more productive as there is not perspiration and can concentrate in better way which is key to success and thus, it widens their perspective and broadens their horizone. Similarly, variety of foods and fruits are available in cold climate in every nation. Miracle garden, for example, in Dubai has beautiful flowers which Bloom in the winters only.
To recapitulate, after analysing both the stances I vehemently vouch that residing in both types of climate, cold and hot, has its own merits and demerits. However, masses prefer as per their body requirements.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, similarly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02413793103 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78357036402 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627586206897 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5927747012 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1333333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53333333333 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264442086999 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711387286042 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048196452193 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14121634146 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032641213464 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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