Many people prefer to stay in the same type of work all their life, whereas others prefer to
change the type of work. Discuss both sides and state your own opinion.
The world is changing rapidly. People today face numerous challenges in achieving a
meaningful and fulfilling life. That is perhaps why some people change their job many times
during their lifetime. However, there are still some who stick to the same job for life. This essay
shall look into the benefits of both approaches.
There are many reasons why some people like sticking to one job. Firstly, the chances of
promotion are much more because of longevity of service. Furthermore, they find greater depth
of satisfaction from their working relationships. There is also much better work-life balance if a
person’s job is stable and secure.
On the other hand, there are some strong benefits that can come from job-hopping. One of the
major reasons for changing jobs is a better pay package, which can help to lessen the financial
burden of an individual or family. Secondly, the experience that is formed through a change in
job can be beneficial in the future. Individuals with a wider range of job experiences and skill
sets are seriously considered for new job openings. Moreover, those who have a wide range of
careers under their belt also have more job security. If they lose their job, they can seek out jobs
in different career fields, as opposed to one career field.
What is more, it is generally seen that earlier on in life people settle for whatever job they can
get. Job satisfaction at that time is not given any priority. But, later on when the person is a bit
comfortable, then changing the job and doing something, which the heart desires is better
because it gives more personal fulfillment. By changing jobs a person may finally discover a job,
which gives him the maximum job satisfaction.
To sum up, it can be said that changing jobs several times during a lifetime, may bring some
challenges in life, but overall it is a positive development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, to sum up, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05295950156 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67885240924 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560747663551 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7740654941 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.1 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.05 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.38176352705 502% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0845331939655 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0347275617935 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037293153145 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0314727327893 0.151304729494 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471769966497 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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