Some people believe that hobbies need to be difficult to be enjoyable.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Most people argue that leisure activities can only be delightful when they have difficulties and are not easy to perform. Though, I strongly disagree with this given topic. In my opinion, the interest of a person would vary from person to person and hobbies in the form of risky activities could be harmful to an individual.
To begin with, almost every human has different likes or dislikes and ideology towards particular work. Due to this reason, some people have an attraction towards simple hobbies which do not contain such a hardness level. For example, children have a wonderful career in singing, painting and drama because they love these hobbies, which are simple as well as pleasurable in nature.
Furthermore, daring activities have the probability of injury. This factor raises the fear in the minds of people which discourages most individuals from performing such risk involved games. Therefore, these acts have the possibility of physical injury and different interests into distinct activities could refrain people from performing these arduous tasks.
Although a tough task has involvement of risk and danger to individuals. If these onerous acts performed under appropriate guidance of trained professionals and in an adequate framework, then it may be entertaining. Yet, an example can be seen that in tracking Mount Everest, professional trekkers try to track these difficult mountains, consequently professional climbers lose their lives after having appropriate skills.
To conclude, I reiterated that every hobby has happiness if it is done with love and dedication. In addition, we cannot generalize this notion that if the difficulty level is high then enjoyment will be more.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 123, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...fficulties and are not easy to perform. Though, I strongly disagree with this given to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, for example, in addition, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42696629213 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89906995454 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63670411985 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6751283925 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.5 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168232809518 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517921609049 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043785044478 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0894501558179 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368402394633 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.