Some parents prefer to send their children to preschool while others say they should stay at home until they are older? What is your opinion?
Majority of the masses believe that children should be sent to kindergarten, whereas opponents argue that it is too early for minors to enroll in a preschool. In my opinion, early admission in the school would benefit the minors in development and learning some basic manners or skills.
To commence with, the child between the age group of three to six have a good observation and ability to learn quickly as compared to other age groups. This psychological advantage would assist the child to learn things immediately in less time span. For example, the research conducted by Harvard university has shown that the children would have fast learning capacity in their early age because their fresh minds have a little stress in an initial period. As a result,the children in their nursery classes can easily learn the different languages in a short period.
Furthermore, early admission also benefits pupils to learn basic academics and habits. These early classes would teach the kids to behave with their peers and improve their confidence in various fields. For instance, those children who have introverted nature could learn to communicate with other pupils, this would enhance their personality and self-esteem. In addition, children also learn different languages and basic fundamentals of education, this would improve their academic performance.
Therefore, the early enrollment of offspring would have positive outcomes in the form of growth in child personality and in academic achievements.
Overall, I firmly believe that early admission in preschool would be a positive step in the formation of a child carrier. This initiative would be beneficial in fast learning and gain basic manners in early age.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, therefore, whereas, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34065934066 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80062921455 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52380952381 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.442757965 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.153846154 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0926876927139 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0391685732584 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0300112114712 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.052657339395 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370624652234 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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