some people think that the internet makes a person more sociable while other think it makes a person less sociable. discuss both views and give your opinion?
Few people argue that the internet makes an individual more linked to other individuals, whereas, others contend that it increases social distancing with other people. In this essay, I will put the lights on both advantages and disadvantages of persons interactions on the internet
Nowadays, the distance might not matter to establish connection with any unknown person from the globe through the internet. There are various platforms which make social interaction so easy that an individual could share his personal information in a short duration. In addition, the internet may be beneficial to carry on video calling with different people without any physical contact. For example, the social meetings can be conducted on video conferencing to refrain from social gatherings, when a contagious disease is declared as a pandemic.This might be the factors which make the internet an imperative medium of social interaction.
By contrast, opponents of the view that physical connections are stronger compared to virtual connections. Firstly, connecting with different people on the internet has various detrimental effects such as threats to privacy by fake accounts. As a result, fraud identities may misuse your personal information in illegal activities which refrain some people from establishing connections on the world web. Examples can be seen in reports which state that people these days are restraining themselves to create the accounts on social media applications to protect their personal identity. Secondly, physical friendship would be lifelong relationships, whereas virtual relations can be ceased with the removal of an account from the internet. These explanations seem to show that social relationships made physically may more stronger than connections built on the internet
Overall, it seems advisable that with the help of cyberspace, distance have become short and social interaction might be feasible in the time of medical emergency. However, it also threatens the privacy of people and teaches the meaning of real friendship.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, whereas, for example, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1753.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61858974359 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01066309827 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.8586297501 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.083333333 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185923207981 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734869978304 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490891349178 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122780450229 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.075916599114 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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