Many people prefer to travel by car rather than buses or trains.
Why do you think this happens?
What can government do to motivate people travel by buses or trains?
It is true that people have more fascinated to travel by car rather than public transportation. This is the wide range of factors that account for why this is happening. In my opinion, this situation could be remedied, government should take some effective measure.
On the one hand, In this contemporary era, pupils not willing to travel by bus or trains, because of their busy routine work as well as lack of time schedule. Having car travel will make them to have a peaceful life, instead of long far waiting on the queue for bus or train. As a result, they can finish their work in a particular time without any tension. They can spend more time with their family, which will lead a happy life.
On the other hand, people use their own vehicle, which will provides huge traffic congestion. Since, the augmented traffic issue, masses could not reach their destination within a time. Consequently, they get effects on professionally and mentally. In addition, due to this problem, people might be suffering for serious health problem. Furthermore, delay of traffic, the sick and sever patients are could not be reached there in time to have further treatment.
First of all, to overcome this issue, People can use the alternative mode of travel such as cruise or boat, which will help them to have fun journey with peaceful travel. Secondly, government should increase the petrol price as well as the spare parts price. Finally, government should broadcast the impact deleterious and effectiveness of air pollution in order to people get the greater awareness of their environment.
In conclusion, although, Only when convergent efforts from all sectors are ensure, can we expect to see much considerable progress in tackling this problem, such as alternative way of transportation and measures taken by government.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 76, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'ensured'.
Suggestion: ensured
...convergent efforts from all sectors are ensure, can we expect to see much considerable...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05980066445 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77972451097 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601328903654 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4211028116 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1875 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8125 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1875 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203814702934 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651346839231 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608976299905 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114706019718 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674466988141 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.