It has long been a subject of discussion whether most individuals work hard to earn paper money or not. In my opinion, money provide great assistance for financial stability and boost confidence of an individuals.
Individuals who has hectic schedule in different streams construction, hospitals, for instance able to earn more. As a result, able to become financially stable. Even though money is not responsible for happiness, shelter, food, and other essential things are important for survival which leads to make people happy. A recent survey was conducted by Stanford University that most people go to work for long hours in order to fullfil their family needs. Therefore, in my view point money assist to make people financially stable.
Another possible reason is to become independent and build confidence. An academic research conducted and published by Hindustan Times that when a person earn while doing job, receive pay which increase his self-esteem. This is due to the fact that they are able to purchase any thing they need in their life. Consequently, while workers particullarly in healthcare sector work more than tweleve hours so that receive six figure salary. Due to this, working women or men has more freedom as well as confident as cpmpare to others.
In conclusion, From what we have discussed above, I believe that Nodoubt, money is not responsible for making person happy but nowadays working hard to earn dollars is a basic necessisty to pay bills on time as well as become independent in the society.
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Suggestion: an individual; individuals
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Suggestion: anything
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1289.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13545816733 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80300899302 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633466135458 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6377409382 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1538461538 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278393094488 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833539296623 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483364441762 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160233609364 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256966847932 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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