Many people think that every individual is responsible for their happiness, but some people believe that are other external factors that influenced us. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is wildly held belief that achieving happiness is responsibility of individual, but there is a strong counter argument amongst sections of the people that cheerfulness is affect by extrinsic factors. However, I am of the opinion that this is a matter to be debated in light of several factors before a reasonable conclusion can be drawn.
To embark on the first side, happiness is very subjective topic. It varies from person to person. It is a sense of feeling. Many believe that happiness is state of mind and heart and it can achieved by yoga and meditation, it leads to inner peace or satisfaction. Also, when individuals get pleasure from playing, laughing, spending time with family and friends and so on, they can feel an inner satisfaction which is a kind of happiness. So, happiness depends on our intrinsic conditions. For example, the job promotion could get happy some people, whereas playing sports please others.
On the other hand, some people believes that external factors like home, car, money, cloths and other material possesions makes person joyful. Some satisfy by fulfil their dream or achieving big in life and this thing bring happiness in their lives. So, for this group of people external factors is pivotal for good and happy life. They think that without these needs, happiness not achieve.
After analysing both the views, it is hard to take one side but I am if the opinion that inner satisfaction and peace makes people happy than external factors.
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- Task1
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 175, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...ions of the people that cheerfulness is affect by extrinsic factors. However, I am of the...
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Line 2, column 190, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'achieve'
Suggestion: achieve
...s is state of mind and heart and it can achieved by yoga and meditation, it leads to inn...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, whereas, for example, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1239.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.956 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64238982741 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.3361021815 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32119988446 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910167629071 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735735441298 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17868316154 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0901707131432 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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